Disclaimer : This is only the backbone for a conference, intended to help
support my speech.
It definitely doesen't even try to be a good presentation.
Maybe this might help to focus on the unusual, lateral-thinking, thought provoquing
aspects I tried to expose...
If this is good it'll speak for itself.
If you feel it's rather dry, w yes indeed, I tried to focus on content; I've
seen to much empty good looking stuff on the web.